Monday 16 March 2015
Ellie & Trinity's 100wc - week 26...
Attractive and soundless, their voice echoed towards the
beach. As they turned the corner, the seagulls flew by the
blue sea. They glimpsed at the edge of what seemed to be
a tornado. The closer it got ; the further they ran. It got close
really close. It was not stopping any time soon.
Becky widened her eyes as the shock kicked in ; Peter
rocked from side to side wondering if he'd stay alive for
much longer. Out of breath, they had to keep running if they
wanted to stay alive...
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Hi Ellie and Trinity. I enjoyed reading your 100wc entry this week. Your introduction was strong and set a powerful atmosphere. At fist I thought you were going to look at the topic from the perspective of the seagulls, but then you introduced the human characters. I wonder what it would have been like if you had continued with the seagulls? Keep writing because I really enjoyed this very well written text!
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