Back in those good days it was me and my beloved tribe; I had everything I wanted: education, freedom, friends and a happy family. But that all changed when the grey, miserable people came. We approached them with no caution. Yet the next thing I knew a hyena’s laugh flushed their faces. My friends had fled making the peace sign while they ran for their lives. I hadn’t noticed where we were while I was asleep. I was awakened to an uncomfortable feeling I was packed together like a sandwich. I climbed through the bodies( which were mostly dead ) to find out I was on a slave boat.
Adom - what a fabulously-powerful 100wc you've crafted! I particularly love the phrase 'a hyena's laugh flushed their faces' - it's so vivid and descriptive!
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Mr K :-)
Wow Adom what a amazing peace of writing.:-D
ReplyDeletean amazing piece of writing i loved it can you write a sequel:}
ReplyDeletean amazing piece of writing i loved it can you write a sequel:}
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