Ring o'roses
Twelve o’clock, midnight “lets go,” I explained, As we left the house in the pitch black. we walk down the alleyway , strolled across the road, suddenly the street lights went off it started to get mysterious….
All of a sudden we herd “mumer mumer”
as we looked around there sitting down was a rag doll , it’s eyes were closed until a second later all of a sudden the rag doll flashed opened it’s eyes ,it said “don’t leave me, I only want to play”. then the rag doll stood up...
If they hadn't gone out, If they didn't look behind them,if just if, but they did all of that and the rad doll got what it wanted.
“Ding dong” I opened the door an, an, and there was the doll...
creepy... ~shivers~
ReplyDeleteYikes! Scary stuff, Molly! This is a really atmospheric 100wc - just right for giving people nightmares!
ReplyDeleteMr K :-)
Molly, spooooky story and with a fitting picture too! Seems like strange things happen late at night. Your story affirms that! Is there any way you'll turn this into a satisfying ending or would somehow add a little humor into it? Well done!
ReplyDeleteMrs. Peterson (Team 100wc)
Texas, USA
Well done Molly! You have used exciting words to create a scary story with a lovely twist at the end. I am now going to be very careful when I open the door..... Next time remember to review your writing and check the punctuation. Can you remember the rules for using speech marks? Such as starting with a capital letter and there must be punctuation before the ".
ReplyDeleteWell done
Mr PB (Team 100WC)
AMAZING!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI love it
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