Wednesday 1 October 2014

McKay's 100wc - week 5...

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  1. well done McKay

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  2. A really exciting 100wc, McKay well done! I really like that you've used some great language in here, but do try to check your punctuation carefully and make sure you don't let your tense change part way through the story!
    Mr K :-)

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