Saturday 20 September 2014
Nathaniel's 100wc - week 3...
Bullets zipped around him, pinging of the worn mossy bricks all around. “Why oh why did i try and escape?” mumbled the boy as he ran on to the end of the bridge. Splat- a bullet hit his leg . He limped the last few metres. He turned around to look one more time at his pursuers, “this is the end of the line kid!” shouted one of the burly prison guards, the boy just looked at them with his stone grey eyes. After ten long minutes, he spoke, “I am doing this for the people you ill treat every day and I hope this makes you think next time you kill someone or send them to prison for no reason...” There was a shocked silence and then, he jumped.
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Mrs Williams (Team 100WC)
ReplyDeleteNathaniel you have chosen some fantastic vocabulary in your 100 word challenge entry. I also liked how you have used a variety of sentence structures - your shorter ones create impact and build up the tension.
This writing is slightly longer than 100 words. I hope you take part again in the 100WC - if you do, try to make your writing as close to the 100 word limit as possible.
nice
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