Surrounding our house's are cornfields that spread for miles. The corn in the fields is as high as a car. One summers evening Jamie, Molly, Chloe and I were running the in the cornfields playing tig. Suddenly, I heard a scream I thought it was my friends playing a joke. I began searching harder for my friends, shouting for them. I heard Jamie screaming my name, I ran as fast as I could running into something. It gave me a fright, when I opened my eyes it was just the Scarecrow. It was beginning to get dark. I heard rustling in the corn, as I looked around…..
I wonder why I was screaming, thank you Libby for giving me a role in your 100wc.
ReplyDeleteScary, scary stuff, Libby - I'll think twice before walking in any fields from now on! Poor old Jamie - I hope she survived!
ReplyDelete* Think about why we use apostrophes - does 'house's' on the first line need one?
Mr K :-)
i want to carry on reading
ReplyDeleteOh the suspense!
ReplyDeleteI like that you have begun with a description to set the scene and then the story begins. I can feel the panic and urgency as you search for your friends. You hooked me in! And I want to know what happens next!!
Thanks for sharing your work Libby!
Miss P (Team 100WC)
AMAZING!!
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