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Great 100wc Coral! But try to explain the story a bit more.
Ha that's hilarious
This would be better if had explained the reason for the telegram at the beginning. It is a bit confusing as to why he has received it.
I disagree entirely, Coral! I think this is a moving and mysterious 100wc and those who read it carefully & think about it will know what it is about. Excellent writing (though do think about the difference between 'peace' and 'piece').Mr K :)
Well done Coral your 100wc is amazing
Wow coral an amazing 100 word challenge I like the start its very well punctuated. :-)
wow I coral what a lovely piece of writing very mysterious
Well done coral great 100wc
Poor Farmer John
AMAZING Coral!!!!!!!!!!
Great 100wc Coral! But try to explain the story a bit more.
ReplyDeleteHa that's hilarious
ReplyDeleteThis would be better if had explained the reason for the telegram at the beginning. It is a bit confusing as to why he has received it.
ReplyDeleteI disagree entirely, Coral! I think this is a moving and mysterious 100wc and those who read it carefully & think about it will know what it is about. Excellent writing (though do think about the difference between 'peace' and 'piece').
DeleteMr K :)
Well done Coral your 100wc is amazing
ReplyDeleteWow coral an amazing 100 word challenge I like the start its very well punctuated. :-)
ReplyDeletewow I coral what a lovely piece of writing very mysterious
ReplyDeleteWell done coral great 100wc
ReplyDeletePoor Farmer John
ReplyDeleteAMAZING Coral!!!!!!!!!!
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